Thursday, 12 March 2015

my writing goal

walt:To focus on my main ideas in my work.

For example.
"August go get the mail"mum said.

'fine' I say mumbling.I walk to the mailbox get the stinky
russelt mail out of the old mailbox and ran back inside

"What happened" Via ran down stairs and asked 
in a creepy voice.

'Everyone is laughing and starring at me.'

What! mum yells feeling like she can hold an new fashioned car.

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