One of my careers paragraph.

This is my high school subjects paragraphs:

On the count of this to be a General partitioner I should consider doing 

biology,chemistry,physics and health because it will be easier for me to get the job, because I would know quiet a lot about things,biology is really important because if someone gets injured I would have yo help them,so I have to know how to do that.

I have linked my paragraphs and I have  stayed on one idea, I didn't keep on changing my ideas.i have used real facts not not fake made up facts and I didn't write my opinion on all the paragraphs.